"Unforgivable" Another Original

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Sat Dec 09, 2006 3:55 pm

This is great. I like it a lot more than any of your other originals that I've heard. The vocal melody is awesome and makes the song IMO. Guitar is pretty cool too, almost reminds me of damien rice a little bit. I think the guitar and vocals suit each other perfectly in this song. Very nice job ginger

Gold · Post by **Gold** » Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:22 pm

mangold wrote: BAH

this guys writing great originals! why would you want him to do a cover? BAH

huh? whats wrong with doing a cover?

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sat Dec 09, 2006 9:32 pm

Gold wrote:
mangold wrote: BAH

this guys writing great originals! why would you want him to do a cover? BAH
huh? whats wrong with doing a cover?

there is nothing wrong with doing a cover, but i feel like when you get to a certain point, i.e. where mitch is, doing a cover is like practice. we've all done a hell of alot of covers, but if you can write great original stuff, thats something better and above covers imo

Gold · Post by **Gold** » Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:09 pm

mangold wrote:
Gold wrote:
mangold wrote: BAH

this guys writing great originals! why would you want him to do a cover? BAH
huh? whats wrong with doing a cover?
there is nothing wrong with doing a cover, but i feel like when you get to a certain point, i.e. where mitch is, doing a cover is like practice. we've all done a hell of alot of covers, but if you can write great original stuff, thats something better and above covers imo

its not a big deal, i just wanted to hear how he plays dave. i figure its probably pretty good, and i wanted to hear how it fits his voice. whatever.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:06 am

you guys are crazy. yea man, i'll do a cover. i just don't do them cause there are tons of covers on this board so i don't want to bore people. but i'll do one for you

just give me some time. now that i have a job, it's goign to be more tough to get the time to do it.

Gold · Post by **Gold** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 7:23 am

thanks appsy

captainburrito · Post by **captainburrito** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:10 pm

mangold wrote:patented live time commentary

1. great guitar, recorded beautifully and what a great little riff, congratulations

2. the vocals are fantastic as always, i feel for the first time like this song was written for your voice, where your other stuff forced your voice into somewhere it didn't belong.

3. incredible lyrics, that is all. no awkward word choice or structure

all i can say is i wish to god i could write or perform a song like this, definetly one of the best originals ive heard on these boards.

i would buy the album this is on.

ditto....amazing job. Period.

stoca2 · Post by **stoca2** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:37 pm

i told you pre you know who music is alot better. FAG

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:40 pm

CoSta wrote:i told you pre you know who music is alot better. FAG

...

drinky drinky??

stoca2 · Post by **stoca2** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:55 pm

mangold wrote:
CoSta wrote:i told you pre you know who music is alot better. FAG
...

drinky drinky??

Im wasted and i just made out with my sister

AustinG · Post by **AustinG** » Sun Dec 10, 2006 9:06 pm

haven't been on in a while.. Life seems to pull you in different directions sometimes... Well anyways for my critique...

Lovely song brotha, no complaints. Sounded like you meant it...

I think you did a very nice job with the guitar and the lyrics were heart felt...

Is it one Track?

peace

EnFuego · Post by **EnFuego** » Mon Dec 11, 2006 1:24 am

Great song Mitch. You've got talent.

I don't have a good enough to critique your mixing or whatever you changed with the recording, but it sounded great to me.

Is it possible to download Sand Song from somewhere? I dont think I can download it form your myspace page.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Mon Dec 11, 2006 7:14 am

AustinG wrote:haven't been on in a while.. Life seems to pull you in different directions sometimes... Well anyways for my critique...

Lovely song brotha, no complaints. Sounded like you meant it...

I think you did a very nice job with the guitar and the lyrics were heart felt...

Is it one Track?

peace

nah, it's a few tracks. i have my guitar's soundhole mic'd and i have an amp mic's and then i laid the vocals afterwards.

EnFuego wrote:Great song Mitch. You've got talent.

I don't have a good enough to critique your mixing or whatever you changed with the recording, but it sounded great to me.

Is it possible to download Sand Song from somewhere? I dont think I can download it form your myspace page.

i'll upload it for you later today if no one else does it for you

thanks everyone for your comments. i'm glad more people got to listen to this before it was buried so i could get some feedback. again, i appreciate the listen and for the critiques.

stoca2 · Post by **stoca2** » Mon Dec 11, 2006 8:25 am

FYI MITCHY. Steal one of my songs again and I will take ur guitar and shit on it.

lyrics101 · Post by **lyrics101** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:02 pm

Well written; sounds like a trademark Christian pop song or something, but whatev. The guitar is pretty.

Practice yawning while you're singing; I'm not kidding. Also hum a bit, make sure you're vibrations are coming through all of your reverberators/vibrators; your chest, throat, head, all of it. Helps to relax all your muscles, stand up straight; especially relax your back (upper and lower) and shoulders.

As for the yawning, definitely do that; it'll round out your tone more. Not literally yawning, but just fake a big ol' yawn and sing. You'll notice the difference.

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"Unforgivable" Another Original

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