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								by wench  Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:39 am 
			
			
			
			
			
			
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by dmbvideos  Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:48 am 
			
			
			
			
			
			Didn't work.
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
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								by wench  Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:54 am 
			
			
			
			
			
			my bad, its works now
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by dmbvideos  Thu Dec 02, 2004 2:06 am 
			
			
			
			
			
			Sounds pretty good. It still sounds like you're whispering, but not as bad as before. Sing louder still, and you'll project.
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
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								by yworry69  Thu Dec 02, 2004 4:09 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			you mixed up can't and won't in the first chorus but it was pretty good
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by mangold  Thu Dec 02, 2004 6:22 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			that was mad hotness. notable improvement in singing
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
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								by mdel21  Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:12 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			really like the guitar
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by onid41  Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:45 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			mdel21 wrote: really like the guitar
ya sweet guitar playing
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								by wench  Thu Dec 02, 2004 8:12 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			you mixed up can't and won't in the first chorus
so...suicide? 
jk, actually I mixed it up all three times, my bad 
thanks all, I didnt have the song handy when I recorded this (accounts for the lyrical retardation I guess) and I couldnt remember like the bridge or any of the second guitar parts so I just made shit up
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by DMBartender  Sun Dec 05, 2004 7:22 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			i really dig the guitar, but you gotta reach deeper for the vocals.  you sound like you have a good voice, but you need to project more.
			
			
									
						
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