Post recordings you have made here and get feedback from the community. Songwriting topics would also reside here.
Moderators: onid41 , jkanter
wench
Posts: 24 Joined: Thu Sep 16, 2004 6:34 pm
Contact:
Post
by wench » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:39 am
dmbvideos
DMBVideos.com
Posts: 169 Joined: Sun Nov 16, 2003 4:02 pm
Location: Boston, MA
Contact:
Post
by dmbvideos » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:48 am
Didn't work.
wench
Posts: 24 Joined: Thu Sep 16, 2004 6:34 pm
Contact:
Post
by wench » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:54 am
my bad, its works now
dmbvideos
DMBVideos.com
Posts: 169 Joined: Sun Nov 16, 2003 4:02 pm
Location: Boston, MA
Contact:
Post
by dmbvideos » Thu Dec 02, 2004 2:06 am
Sounds pretty good. It still sounds like you're whispering, but not as bad as before. Sing louder still, and you'll project.
yworry69
Posts: 60 Joined: Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:31 pm
Post
by yworry69 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 4:09 pm
you mixed up can't and won't in the first chorus but it was pretty good
edit - forgot to mention, especially good guitar
mangold
DMBTabs.com Authority
Posts: 6734 Joined: Sat Jul 31, 2004 11:31 am
Contact:
Post
by mangold » Thu Dec 02, 2004 6:22 pm
that was mad hotness. notable improvement in singing
mdel21
DMBTabs.com Authority
Posts: 31494 Joined: Sun Nov 17, 2002 12:26 am
Contact:
Post
by mdel21 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:12 pm
really like the guitar
onid41
DMBTabs.com Authority
Posts: 22986 Joined: Mon Jun 28, 2004 2:30 pm
Location: long island
Post
by onid41 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:45 pm
mdel21 wrote: really like the guitar
ya sweet guitar playing
-dino
wench
Posts: 24 Joined: Thu Sep 16, 2004 6:34 pm
Contact:
Post
by wench » Thu Dec 02, 2004 8:12 pm
you mixed up can't and won't in the first chorus
so...suicide?
jk, actually I mixed it up all three times, my bad
thanks all, I didnt have the song handy when I recorded this (accounts for the lyrical retardation I guess) and I couldnt remember like the bridge or any of the second guitar parts so I just made shit up
DMBartender
DMBTabs.com Authority
Posts: 1607 Joined: Fri Jul 16, 2004 9:48 am
Location: Minneapolis, MN
Post
by DMBartender » Sun Dec 05, 2004 7:22 pm
i really dig the guitar, but you gotta reach deeper for the vocals. you sound like you have a good voice, but you need to project more.
-Ryan
Hey guys. Whoaa, big gulps huh? Alright... well, see ya later.