Post recordings you have made here and get feedback from the community.  Songwriting topics would also reside here.
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								by zaphod  Tue Oct 19, 2004 3:47 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			so this is my first real attempt at recording anything, it's "father and son" by cat stevens
please critique this, i tried to make it follow cat steven's recording. if people want i'll post what i recorded it with
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								by zaphod  Wed Oct 20, 2004 3:06 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
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								by mlb1399  Wed Oct 20, 2004 3:48 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Guitar sounds good.  Sounds like your singing is a little off key at times and you need a little work on singing the melody.  If you work at it, I don't think you are too far off from getting it down good.  Nice work!  
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
								zaphod 							 
									
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								by zaphod  Thu Nov 04, 2004 2:54 am 
			
			
			
			
			
			anyone have any criticism on the recording quality/effects? like i said this was my first real attempt so im looking to improve.
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
								DUS7IN 							 
									
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								by DUS7IN  Sun Nov 21, 2004 9:16 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			the recording and effects had a real pleasing effect. i like the stripped down feel. I think you did good by not crowding the music.