..something to help you guys sleep better..opinions please

JacknCoke · Post by **JacknCoke** » Mon Jan 26, 2004 3:59 pm

Its just a lil track I came up with the other day..nothing crazy or into it, just a plain sweet sounding lil song..Let me know what you guys and gals think...

http://home.comcast.net/~edwardcw/Pale.MP3

rochsuperstar · Post by **rochsuperstar** » Mon Jan 26, 2004 4:04 pm

Sounds really nice, i like the rythm and sound.. Heard a lil buzzin but besides that it sounded awesome.. is it just one person layering or multiple people..

JacknCoke · Post by **JacknCoke** » Mon Jan 26, 2004 4:09 pm

ya, its just me layering the 2 tracks together...about that buzz, i dunno..im still learning the cool edit pro and the noise reduction features and all....
I wanted to add lyrics to this but im not too sure..sounds like it should stay instrumental to me...i dunno..

rochsuperstar · Post by **rochsuperstar** » Mon Jan 26, 2004 4:39 pm

I like it the way it is.. Add some vocals to layer over the music, like a rythmic yell if you know what i mean.. i think thatd sound cool..

JacknCoke · Post by **JacknCoke** » Tue Jan 27, 2004 12:08 am

thanks for the reply rochsuperstar, greatly appreciated...though, 45 views and only 1 person said something...??? i mean, if you listened you must have had an opinion...good or bad i dont care, its only gonna help me put up better music for you guys down the road hopefully

NPR · Post by **NPR** » Tue Jan 27, 2004 12:17 am

That was a nice calming groove. I think I am ready for bed now!

Thanks!

squall2811 · Post by **squall2811** » Tue Jan 27, 2004 8:52 am

That was good little diddy there bro. There are some areas where it could have been a little tighter. Example around 1:18 or 1:19 to about 1:27. You could have taken a slightly different approach, to the notes that you were hitting. Well thats just my two cents. Keep up the good work man.

JacknCoke · Post by **JacknCoke** » Tue Jan 27, 2004 2:32 pm

i agree...after listening to it a couple times after posting i wondered why i was happy with that low notes...im probably gonna go back and do it again with something different

horsmar15 · Post by **horsmar15** » Tue Jan 27, 2004 4:39 pm

I like the progression, but the solo could have been better. Overall, has potential.