New Song from me inside!

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New Song from me inside!

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I call this "Light". (Why? I don't know. :p)

Anyway, it's a riff I've been playing alot lately, and I though I could have some fun recording this...

http://s93540467.onlinehome.us/light.mp3

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sounded good man, you could use a few more changes but the overall idea is pretty damn good
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Post by dmbguitar718 »

hey thanks alot fatjack. :) this is by no means a finished product. i plan to get back in that studio and record with some more instruments. i'm working on another section to add, but it gets pretty frustrating when you run out of ideas. in any case, i would still call this a work in progress.
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Post by Matty Boom »

i definitely liked that...and for whatever, i thought 'the light' was a very fitting title, i don't know why though...love to hear the finished product
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Post by dmbguitar718 »

also, i realized this track is in mono, so i'm going to upload it again in stereo this time. i also renamed it to "light"...the "the" wasnt really necessary, and i realized i got it from the song "the weight"...so...yeah.:)
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Post by horsmar15 »

I liked the melody, but the timing seemed to be off in a few places. Would make a cool song with vocals.
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yeah, i did the recording pretty quickly, and i agree my rythym did slip in parts.
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