My Warehouse

The Man of The Hour · Post by **The Man of The Hour** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 5:57 pm

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/tunes4/music.html

Shaky guitar at some parts, mostly shaky vocals. How is it?

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:15 pm

sounding great...making progress every day huh?

keep it up...I especially like the intro...

clean up some spots, and you are ready to gig

kudos

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 7:09 pm

Damn dude....the passion intro-> the verse sounds really smooth....great work!

You've got a cool voice too! Definately got some soul.....just sounds like need to get a bit a more air flowing from your gut ..

Nicely done...smooth out the rough bits and you're set.

Good work

IronMike778 · Post by **IronMike778** » Thu Jul 10, 2003 9:18 am

Is this your first post? I've been away for a while and don't remember hearing you before.........

I thought the passion intro was fantastic

.......I really don't think you could improve on that part...real nice.

The rest of the song sounded good (maybe a bit rushed?) and the vocals were solid........nice job TMOTH.

Mike