look mom, I can fail! (new original)

Banjobach · Post by **Banjobach** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 1:31 am

So this one is really short. I'm all about minimizing suffering.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tw062a1542I

Ages:
Look at time sneaking by
all these lives gone awry
All I see are tired souls
staring through their car windows

I wonder,
is this how I grow old
I feel this
numbness taking hold

I was small, dreamt it all
climb a fence, kick a ball
Now I talk a certain way
Bigger words and less to say

I wonder,
Is this how I grow old
I feel this
empty taking hold
I wonder, wonder,
how I'll make it home

Hope you enjoy.

markTR · Post by **markTR** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:28 am

Cool song man, not much to critique really.

Klondog · Post by **Klondog** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:15 pm

Nice. Enjoyed it.

Banjobach · Post by **Banjobach** » Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:03 pm

Thank you, as always, for listening gentlemen.

sfmartins · Post by **sfmartins** » Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:28 am

Sounds really good.

Grachi · Post by **Grachi** » Tue May 19, 2009 10:01 pm

awesome awesome stuff. love the lyrics. Always find the most powerful lyrics are the ones that have less to say but more of a meaning to them.