critique my bands first two songs

[davekllawre210]

So my bad got to record to songs of ours in a guys basement we know that has a nice recording set up...these are the first 2 songs we've done.

We just ran through them once or twice with all the music and then against once or twice with the vocals, nothing too complicated.

Anyway, just looking for some constructive criticism. Here is the link...it's the only two songs on there.

Thanks

http://www.myspace.com/upstairsnick

[sfmartins]

I like the feeling of the songs, and I the singer is good IMO.

I would probably reduce a bit the volume on the delay of the rhythm guitar (Fireside).
At the beginning it sounds ok, but with the all band it is probably too much.
The "bee distortion" in Wake Up can probably be improved.

Great stuff!!