An Orignal: "Move Along"

geekmug · Post by **geekmug** » Mon Jun 09, 2003 6:51 am

I actually recorded this about 2 months ago.. this is the first complete song I wrote.. beyond that it's the first song I wrote lyrics to and sung.. At the time, I had ever intent to re-record the vocal track.. but I never did, so many apologies for some of the terrible places in the vocals.

"Move Along" - Scott Dial

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Mon Jun 09, 2003 6:56 am

Hey thats a nice tune , im diggin the intro very much

Maybe its just me but it sounds just a bit out of key with the voice

the guitar playing is very solid though

Keep it coming

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Mon Jun 09, 2003 7:01 am

yeah man those vocals sound pretty harsh. it was off key pretty much the whole time. it sounded more like you were talking than singing.

kudos on the guitar playing though. it sounded very professional.

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jun 09, 2003 8:23 am

to echo...great guitar...voice sounds workable, but ya' gotta' actually sing

...no offense, but you are just talking