Original "Tomorrow Today"

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Mon Jul 03, 2006 3:15 am

I might have posted this once before but it wasn't very good... This ones better and I tuned down half a step and that helped my voice. Let me know what you think.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/rwyrdr

martinstud17 · Post by **martinstud17** » Tue Jul 04, 2006 8:47 pm

its got a real dark feel to it, must be what you are going for, i like the guitar part a lot it sounds pretty sweet. the voice is good too, i like it.

jmack · Post by **jmack** » Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:45 pm

i can't listen to it right now (and im not trying to be a smart ass) but if you want to keep the title it's "Tomorrow Today" 2 r's.

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:10 pm

jmack wrote:i can't listen to it right now (and im not trying to be a smart ass) but if you want to keep the title it's "Tomorrow Today" 2 r's.

Thank you.

Kevin_1313 · Post by **Kevin_1313** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 1:15 pm

The guitar was really good, it had a great atmospheric sound. The singing was good too, but I think what would really help the song is if you increased the intensity of your voice as the song goes on, especially when you get to "until I live today" which seems to be the peak of the song- sing that line with everything you've got. Just a suggestion, but I liked the song overall.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 2:21 pm

Your voice is getting better. keep working.

when i read the title all i hear is the kanye west song...

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:09 pm

praisedave wrote:Your voice is getting better. keep working.

when i read the title all i hear is the kanye west song...

They always play that on the radio in the weight room...

Cuz every worthless word we get more far away, and nothing's ever promised tomorrow today, and nothing lasts forever but be honest babe, tough but it may be the only way

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:13 pm

mattinbeloit wrote:
praisedave wrote:Your voice is getting better. keep working.

when i read the title all i hear is the kanye west song...
They always play that on the radio in the weight room...

Cuz every worthless word we get more far away, and nothing's ever promised tomorrow today, and nothing lasts forever but be honest babe, tough but it may be the only way

i actually like that song alot.

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Fri Jul 14, 2006 3:32 pm

praisedave wrote:
mattinbeloit wrote:
praisedave wrote:Your voice is getting better. keep working.

when i read the title all i hear is the kanye west song...
They always play that on the radio in the weight room...

Cuz every worthless word we get more far away, and nothing's ever promised tomorrow today, and nothing lasts forever but be honest babe, tough but it may be the only way
i actually like that song alot.

I kind of liked him, but when he made that statement about George Bush I lost a lot of respect for him. It had nothing to do with my political ties, I just thought it was a stupid statement, and for someone that I actually liked in the rap industry because of the stuff he chose to write about, he seemed like every other guy out there when he said that...

dmbvideos · Post by **dmbvideos** » Fri Jul 14, 2006 8:44 pm

That song sounded really good, man.
Tab?

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Fri Jul 14, 2006 10:31 pm

mattinbeloit wrote:
praisedave wrote:
mattinbeloit wrote:
praisedave wrote:Your voice is getting better. keep working.

when i read the title all i hear is the kanye west song...
They always play that on the radio in the weight room...

Cuz every worthless word we get more far away, and nothing's ever promised tomorrow today, and nothing lasts forever but be honest babe, tough but it may be the only way
i actually like that song alot.
I kind of liked him, but when he made that statement about George Bush I lost a lot of respect for him. It had nothing to do with my political ties, I just thought it was a stupid statement, and for someone that I actually liked in the rap industry because of the stuff he chose to write about, he seemed like every other guy out there when he said that...

i never liked him as a person, but i do like his music

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Sat Jul 15, 2006 9:51 pm

praisedave wrote:
mattinbeloit wrote:
praisedave wrote:
mattinbeloit wrote:
praisedave wrote:Your voice is getting better. keep working.

when i read the title all i hear is the kanye west song...
They always play that on the radio in the weight room...

Cuz every worthless word we get more far away, and nothing's ever promised tomorrow today, and nothing lasts forever but be honest babe, tough but it may be the only way
i actually like that song alot.
I kind of liked him, but when he made that statement about George Bush I lost a lot of respect for him. It had nothing to do with my political ties, I just thought it was a stupid statement, and for someone that I actually liked in the rap industry because of the stuff he chose to write about, he seemed like every other guy out there when he said that...
i never liked him as a person, but i do like his music

It was just weird that someone that seems so smart with the kind of stuff he puts out would go and say something like that.

brian_ok · Post by **brian_ok** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 2:43 pm

did Kanye say that Bush hated black people, or was that someone else?

Matt, I liked that a lot. The guitar was great, and consistent (I didn't hear one mistake), and you have a great voice. I agree with what someone earlier said--it's important to find an apex of the song, and build up to that and come down. The energy of your song was pretty much the same all the way through. That's a detail though, and you shouldn't have any trouble nailing that down. Great job overall!

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:21 pm

brian_ok wrote:did Kanye say that Bush hated black people, or was that someone else?

Matt, I liked that a lot. The guitar was great, and consistent (I didn't hear one mistake), and you have a great voice. I agree with what someone earlier said--it's important to find an apex of the song, and build up to that and come down. The energy of your song was pretty much the same all the way through. That's a detail though, and you shouldn't have any trouble nailing that down. Great job overall!

Kanye said that George Bush didnt care about black people, the fact of the matter is Bush doesnt care about much of anything, hes not a racist tho

brian_ok · Post by **brian_ok** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:27 pm

George bush cares about arabs.