My First Original - Recording Inside

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:05 am

Okay, I've put the lyrics up..but now it's finally done. My first original. I think it needs work...as does every first song I suppose. I'm not really comfortable with the vocal track, I'm going to end up re-doing it..there are a few slip-ups I'd like to fix. I might even lift the song up a couple of half-steps by reccomendation and try it out. Anyways, here you go. All mixing done by my engineer, Tim Jacobs. Thanks Tim

"In The Middle" - Written and Performed by Whitney C. Borisenok

http://s63.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2NSJ ... 9HIRR07NQ3

Jenns4Ever9501 · Post by **Jenns4Ever9501** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:11 am

Very nice Whit. It's so hard to actually write a song, I give credit to anyone who even attempts to write a half-way decent song. Again, very nice Whitster, I like it.

sfmartins · Post by **sfmartins** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:54 pm

Here is the opinion of someone who does not sing:

Positive: you have a nice voice, and you are able considerably vary your pitch.
The melody was very nice.

Negative: You could sing with more strength and feeling: did you close your eyes while singing?

Overall it's a very nice song. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep writting songs and share them. I want to hear the next one!

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 4:19 pm

about time did i harass you enough about this song?

it was worth the wait. i like this alot. sometimes when you hold a note ya get a little shaky. i cant sing like this tho more power to ya!

MORE PWEASE!

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 5:28 pm

thanks for the feedback everyone

keep it coming!

Kahn · Post by **Kahn** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 5:43 pm

I will not listen to this

edit: listening now

dmbvideos · Post by **dmbvideos** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 5:48 pm

Sounds good. I really like the rhythm.

DrumsFoDaSoul · Post by **DrumsFoDaSoul** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:26 pm

Sounded like Say Goodbye the first couple of notes.

mdel21 · Post by **mdel21** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:10 pm

it'll sound great on the CD you're sending.

whatshername · Post by **whatshername** » Wed Mar 22, 2006 11:28 pm

mdel21 wrote:it'll sound great on the CD you're sending.

you're right! which i'll be sending when i get back to VT..i'm in florida until saturday morning