Post recordings you have made here and get feedback from the community.  Songwriting topics would also reside here.
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								by dmb_rulz  Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:53 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Anyway hope you like it still trying to learn how to use the recording stuff I have 
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by Cor  Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:02 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Nice catchy little tune. Reminds me of good 90s pop. There's a little pop or something as the vocals come in. 
			
			
									
						
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								by dmb_rulz  Wed Jan 04, 2006 8:41 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Thanks very much I wish he lived closer we would make more songs. He lives in ga and moving to keywest fla. I live all the way up here in ohio 
 I brought my multi recorder with me when I went to vist him.
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
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								by dmb_rulz  Fri Jan 06, 2006 3:47 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Also feel to do any critiquing on the song. 
 Thanks so much for those or heard it. 
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by jellyfish  Fri Jan 06, 2006 4:28 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			I'm listening to it now.  I like it very much, but it's hard to differentiate the Verse/Bridge/Chorus. That would be my only problem with it. [and that's not a problem]
			
			
									
						
										
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
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								by dmb_rulz  Fri Jan 06, 2006 5:10 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Yes I have told my brother that many times he sounds like jack johnson. 
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
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								by Dacoe  Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:50 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			I really like it.  I'm a big fan of JJ, so yeah, this is awesome, haha.  I really hope you guys get to do more stuff soon enough.  
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
				
		
		
			
				
																			
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								by dmb_rulz  Wed Jan 11, 2006 3:08 pm 
			
			
			
			
			
			Thanks so much if i go visit him in keywest I will be sure to bring my multi track recorder