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eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:06 pm

I normally don;t get any replies but I thought I'd keep on posting anyway. I just learned this song and enjoy both singing and playing it. Critique at will....

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jellyfish · Post by **jellyfish** » Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:24 pm

Dude, YOU NEED to SING that song as you sang Crash. i thought the vocals were off-harmony & key. I know you can do better!!

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eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Fri Oct 21, 2005 9:06 pm

Yea, this is deffinately not my best voice. Its been acting up and the lower the notes the more tonedef I get. Is the guitar part even close? I honestly don't know, I just played it the way I wanted.

davekllawre210 · Post by **davekllawre210** » Sat Oct 22, 2005 4:28 am

i still think this is pretty solid. your right the singing was off a little bit in a few spots, but overall i thought it was really good. with a little more practice it'll be awesome. for the guitar. i mean it works out right, but its exactly what you said ur just doing it ur own way. its not the way dave plays it, but thats not really a bad thing. i thought it was pretty good. keep up the good work and keep posting.

eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Sat Oct 22, 2005 6:50 pm

davekllawre210 wrote:i still think this is pretty solid. your right the singing was off a little bit in a few spots, but overall i thought it was really good. with a little more practice it'll be awesome. for the guitar. i mean it works out right, but its exactly what you said ur just doing it ur own way. its not the way dave plays it, but thats not really a bad thing. i thought it was pretty good. keep up the good work and keep posting.

Thsnks, I still feel like I have a long way to go but I'm going to take singing/guitar lessons for the first time.