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thenamenottaken
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by thenamenottaken »
whatcha think peoples?
Correspondence and whispered words
fall short of a lover's embrace
as the moon shines down
and gently illuminates
sweat, tears and kisses
cause the globe to spin
answered prayers and begging
bring unending calm
stubborn oceans separate
desperate hearts do bind
promises of togetherness
shift the continents
sweetly we lay on the fault line
singing songs of love
caresses weave tender magic
the moon shines above
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Kukini
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by Kukini »
very vague, could be more elaborate. Nice imagery however. Very poetic
- Marq