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bngholio14
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short instrumental

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i was up a few nights ago messing with EADGAD tuning and wrote a short piece. i just found it on my comp today and was listening to it, tell me what you think, im not sure if i should just scrap it or try to add more to it. thanks for any input

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the first riff sounds really emo to me.........not my thing. there's some parts that are worth honing and expanding on.
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Liked It

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I actually really liked the emo-ish opening, even though I hate emo with a passion.

I also liked the little running bass part that started around 0:40. I think you could go from the intro to about 0:15 then go right into the bass thing.

You've definitely got something worth exploring.
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Thanks for the comments. About it sounding emo, i dunno how that happened, though this is different from the style I usually write, anyway thanks for the comments.
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Post by Beauford33 »

I like it a lot. I dont know about the emo thing, I didnt really make the connection.

Hey, if you decide to scrap it, send it my way :wink:
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Thanks Beau. Ya I didnt really get the emo connection either, I dont even listen to emo. Oh well.
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Post by myxomatosis »

how could an instrumental be emo?
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Post by juineaux »

sounds cool, like Mulletman said there are certain parts of the song the could be more honed. I don't really get the emo connection......I hear more nick drake than some emo band(sorry I don't know any emo band names). Anyways cool start, defiantely don't scrap it...go with it!
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