NEW ORIGINAL INSTRUMENTAL! CRIT PLEASE!

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Thu May 19, 2005 9:29 pm

so i was messing around with Incubus' pardon me the other day and i was having alot of fun layering the riffs etc. so i made up my own thing and tried to use some theory to make riffs and i layered em for the hell of it. Heres what i came up with. it was fun and i think its worth a listen.

http://www.purevolume.com/andymangold

(kite)

i am sam2 · Post by **i am sam2** » Thu May 19, 2005 9:34 pm

im listening to it right now....some parts the layering gets off a bit...and at points the background gets just to be a jumble....you miss a couple harmonics but im sure you noticed that.

i dunno what you wanna have said about it...it seems to be one thing with a bunch of different stuff layered over it...

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Thu May 19, 2005 9:47 pm

i am sam2 wrote:im listening to it right now....some parts the layering gets off a bit...and at points the background gets just to be a jumble....you miss a couple harmonics but im sure you noticed that.

i dunno what you wanna have said about it...it seems to be one thing with a bunch of different stuff layered over it...

where's it off? i know i missed a few harmonics...

i am sam2 · Post by **i am sam2** » Thu May 19, 2005 10:12 pm

praisedave wrote:
i am sam2 wrote:im listening to it right now....some parts the layering gets off a bit...and at points the background gets just to be a jumble....you miss a couple harmonics but im sure you noticed that.

i dunno what you wanna have said about it...it seems to be one thing with a bunch of different stuff layered over it...
where's it off? i know i missed a few harmonics...

i dunno about "off" but definately awkward: the harmonic at 21 seconds; 40-43 (or thereabout) get kinda weird; the part where you miss a couple harmonics gets off a bit but thats just because of the missing probably.

the second listen was a bit smoother...not bad for just throwin it together...but nothing special(no offense)

eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Fri May 20, 2005 12:22 am

I like looping artists, and this turned out well. For some reason it reminded me of an acoustic Thunderstruck lol.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Fri May 20, 2005 2:26 pm

i am sam2 wrote:
praisedave wrote:
i am sam2 wrote:im listening to it right now....some parts the layering gets off a bit...and at points the background gets just to be a jumble....you miss a couple harmonics but im sure you noticed that.

i dunno what you wanna have said about it...it seems to be one thing with a bunch of different stuff layered over it...
where's it off? i know i missed a few harmonics...
i dunno about "off" but definately awkward: the harmonic at 21 seconds; 40-43 (or thereabout) get kinda weird; the part where you miss a couple harmonics gets off a bit but thats just because of the missing probably.

the second listen was a bit smoother...not bad for just throwin it together...but nothing special(no offense)

none taken i was just messin around with theory... any wrong notes you heard?

i am sam2 · Post by **i am sam2** » Fri May 20, 2005 4:15 pm

praisedave wrote:
i am sam2 wrote:
praisedave wrote:
i am sam2 wrote:im listening to it right now....some parts the layering gets off a bit...and at points the background gets just to be a jumble....you miss a couple harmonics but im sure you noticed that.

i dunno what you wanna have said about it...it seems to be one thing with a bunch of different stuff layered over it...
where's it off? i know i missed a few harmonics...
i dunno about "off" but definately awkward: the harmonic at 21 seconds; 40-43 (or thereabout) get kinda weird; the part where you miss a couple harmonics gets off a bit but thats just because of the missing probably.

the second listen was a bit smoother...not bad for just throwin it together...but nothing special(no offense)
none taken i was just messin around with theory... any wrong notes you heard?

i didnt hear any wrong notes...but to me, its only wrong if it sounds bad, not if its not "theoretically" correct. fatjack or someone can probably tell you if you went out of bounds in that regard. but there are no wrong notes : if it sounds good, its the right note

DRMusic · Post by **DRMusic** » Fri May 20, 2005 11:16 pm

not bad

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Sat May 21, 2005 1:35 am

lacks any real forward propulsion, but still interesting