flake cover

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T1nM4n
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flake cover

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plz critique my flake cover, looking mostly for vocal critiques, any guitar problems i can work out on my own, its a lil shaking in the begining but i think it gets better as it goes, i think it sounds better than my old #41 cover ne ways, let me know wut u think

thnx

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the guitar was good first off to get that out of the way. Overall the vocals were alright. at ttimes it sounded like you were speaking rather than singing though. sometimes it sounded like you might be singing a bit too low but at times like the chorus your pitch was pretty good. keep up the good work and post some more covers buddy
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thnx, ive only been singing for a totaly of 3 weeks now and im looking into getting some vocal training of some sort, a lot of people say i need to sing from my stomach and not my chest, i dont quite know how to do that yet but ive been practicing

thanks for the comment
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Good cover
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Post by T1nM4n »

does anyone else have any more critiques for me?
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