Late Spirit. An Original

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Wed Feb 23, 2005 5:59 pm

This is a short jam. I wrote out the progression but the lead is freestyle, improvising, or whatever you call it lol. Well tell me what you think.

http://s28.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=04XQ ... IYSBS7KR5E

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:01 pm

come on... no one?

eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Wed Feb 23, 2005 10:28 pm

Its got a latin sound which I like, I like the trasnfer at 1:30. I just think your bending too much at the begining on the lead. It makes it sound out of tune. over all good.

borocks · Post by **borocks** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 8:04 am

the melody sounds kind of odd, but that doesn't mean it's bad though. I just think it could be a bit difficult to sing along with it.
did you come up with some lyrics? I wonder how this would sound.