2 originals and stay or leave cover from jon segal

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Thu Jan 06, 2005 10:10 pm

i hosted these and he asked me to post them, so here they are. 2 originals and a stay or leave cover.

btw, he uber-owes me cause these ARE HUGE FILES and took up ALL OF MY SPACE.

he told me to ask for some constructive criticism and feedback.

http://www.angelfire.com/music6/andymangold

edit: i apologize to coldchillin, but all other stuff on the site had to come down to fit these. i think the stuff of his isnt bein used anymore anyways.

SpoonInSpoon · Post by **SpoonInSpoon** » Thu Jan 06, 2005 10:19 pm

great guitar.

vocals are waaaaaaaaaay too nasaly, and the vowels just sound funny.

stay or leave aye wahnt yew nat to go but yew deed.

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Thu Jan 06, 2005 10:44 pm

haha i thot i was listen to praisedave then i realize he doesnt sing that well.

anyway, great vocal, good guitar

welcome a good musician to DMBtabs.com

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Thu Jan 06, 2005 10:45 pm

... thanks for reminding me tran.

Swe dmbfan · Post by **Swe dmbfan** » Thu Jan 06, 2005 10:58 pm

i wanna hear this but i cant at work, but i will be back.. ohh yes i will.

deceptivehero · Post by **deceptivehero** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 12:15 pm

Amaze Me was really good, and your voice sounded alot better on that then it did on the stay or leave cover. I have to get to work so I'll check the other one out when I get home.

jsdmb2005 · Post by **jsdmb2005** » Fri Jan 07, 2005 3:35 pm

Thanks for the Feedback.. Stay or leave was tough because I only did the vocals on it so it was tough to find the timing. Awesome guitar by Pat though!

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:31 am

Jon,
good stuff. i didn't listen to the dave cover but i did listen to the originals. i really liked Amaze Me. Great guitar parts. You kind of got an Oasis thing going with it. Your vocals, like someone already said, way too nasly. But that's something that can definetly be worked on. You're definetly not hopeless.

I didn't like Won't Ever Change as much. It was good, but definetly not as good as Amaze Me. A little too popy I guess. I can't explain it.

Anyway, good stuff, keep em coming.

jsdmb2005 · Post by **jsdmb2005** » Sat Jan 08, 2005 12:26 pm

Thanks Man, I think it sounds particularly nasally through the mic i was using...It's prob the cheapest mic you can buy..lol...glad you liked Amaze Me though and I will get a couple more originals up...Thanks again