AN ORIGINAL NO LYRICS, YOU SUNAVA BITCH PILE OF MONKEY NUTS

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AN ORIGINAL NO LYRICS, YOU SUNAVA BITCH PILE OF MONKEY NUTS

Unread post by Easy E » Fri Nov 12, 2004 2:58 pm

Hey guys here's an original ive been working on for quite some time. I'd appreciate some feedback and maybe some lyric suggestion, im stumped.

Click on the WWW button and its the song Hum Drum.
Cor wrote:I mentioned awhile ago trying to bang this huge near 7 foot woman I know. Hit it last night. I got manhandled, it was sweet.

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Unread post by mangold » Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:34 pm

eze3484 wrote:Hey guys here's an original ive been working on for quite some time. I'd appreciate some feedback and maybe some lyric suggestion, im stumped.

Click on the WWW button and its the song Hum Drum.
na bad... i always write lyrics before guitar. i think its easier that way
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Fri Nov 12, 2004 5:47 pm

that's a bad jam

WRITE SOME LYRICS MOFO
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Unread post by Easy E » Mon Nov 15, 2004 5:16 pm

damn thats a lot of no responses
Cor wrote:I mentioned awhile ago trying to bang this huge near 7 foot woman I know. Hit it last night. I got manhandled, it was sweet.

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Unread post by mangold » Mon Nov 15, 2004 5:31 pm

eze3484 wrote:damn thats a lot of no responses
yeah sorry... I responded...
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Unread post by Mulletman » Mon Nov 15, 2004 5:58 pm

i like it, it has a mellow feel to it. what the hell is going on in the background though? drunken roommates yelling at a tv? that's the way it is at my house........

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Unread post by Easy E » Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:54 pm

Mulletman wrote:i like it, it has a mellow feel to it. what the hell is going on in the background though? drunken roommates yelling at a tv? that's the way it is at my house........
He's actually sober, he's just playing Madden. I dont have a lot of alone time at my apartment for recording. I thought it added sort of a Bad Fish feel to it.
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Unread post by Easy E » Fri Dec 17, 2004 12:37 am

top for no reason at all
Cor wrote:I mentioned awhile ago trying to bang this huge near 7 foot woman I know. Hit it last night. I got manhandled, it was sweet.

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri Dec 17, 2004 3:05 pm

cool. lol. i see jack johnson style a lot in here. overall i like it. Add a lead and it would be pretty good. or vocal.
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