Finally a Cover no one has TRIED!!!

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Finally a Cover no one has TRIED!!!

Post by eclektik_rhythmz »

here is my attempt at Undone (the sweater song) by Weezer.

I reworked the guitar parts completely! Let me know what yall think!!

Its short and fun. With vocals and a twist of something else too!!!

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 31&alid=-1

Cheers,
J.T.
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ha yeaaaa that's hot dude...i like that...then u added the summer lovin..i like that ... it works with ur voice really well...keep it up big man
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Post by DmbFanJason »

hey, that was pretty good...your version seems a lot easier, as it is just the chords being played....I would really suggest that you vary the pitch in the vocals...it sounds like the whole song is in one note...the note drags on too much...good job though, later.
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To the top, Love.

CHeers,
J.T.

I just had to do it :roll:
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bring this garbage to the bottom...how is that your fuckin "style"...it fuckin sucks compared to the original...all it is is the fuckin chords....it's easier and thats it...and your singing is very strange...you stay in the same pitch through the whole song...vary it up some man...take your own advice that you gave juineaux...later
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Post by eclektik_rhythmz »

Oh like i should listen to u! Anything that is not played note for note the way the original artist plays it, is deemed shitty by u. And also i wrote the music for that rendition purposfully different than Weezer. What's this, Have u ever tried to be original on anything u have played??? Hmm i think the answer is NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

Kiss my ass Jason, Also the vocals are varied, Do u know anything but DAVE??

U know what i would love to meet u one of these days...R u going to any of your GOD's Acoustic shows????
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im all the way out in the west....

and dont give me this rendition originality BULLSHIT...you play it that way because you can play it that way, and thats it...

if I met you, I would beat the fuck out of you, so you dont want to meet me.
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Post by eclektik_rhythmz »

PLease Focker!!! Dude u gots no idea look at the real tab for Undone anyone could play it. I do it differently b/c i want to. Plain and simple.

But i wasn't calling u out for a fight, i just wondered if u'd be checking out D&T b/c i'll be at some shows and i wanted to see if your personality was the same as it is on these boards.

But now i would just love to bitch slap your punk ass and take your guitar and beat down with it. Trust me dude i'm sure i'd whoop your ass!!!!
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ok...I'm 6 3' 200..........what are you
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Post by eclektik_rhythmz »

Honestly i'm 6'2" and about 230 lbs.

And for that matter I grew up in majorly crime ridden inner city neighborhood. But who cares we're on the other sides of the country.
Its just like 2-Pac and Biggie. lol
I'm done with u man. I am joining the rest of this board I WILL NEVER LISTEN TO OR EVEN LOOK AT ANY OF YOUR POSTS AGAIN.
AND feel free to do the same since your critiques mean JACK SHIT B/C U HAVE NO ORIGINALS and U TALK SHIT WHEN PPL R ORIGINAL.

Cheers,
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whoa hey bro....are you fat????????damn.jk ...anyway, look I don't dog originality...i thinks its great, but I am sick and tired of people calling "chords" of a song, or an easy way out of it "originality"

did you hear my "creativity and originality" recording of tripping billies?

that explains more than half of the originality on these boards.
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Post by eclektik_rhythmz »

no honestly i have never seen that link...
I believe this is stupid man u r entitled to your opinion but y u doggin me so hard??
I never dogged u like this i just stating my opinion on the vocals but u r doggin the whole attempts i make...
Why do u feel the need to be the asshole? Just be a little more thoughtful in the way u put things..
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"SoMuchToPost aka DmbFanJason....BLOWS!!!!"

"Your rhythm is off during captain completely at 1:25 and other points during the song. And the vocals on captain need work, off key a good bit but i think with practice the vocals could work with the exception of around 1:40. u start do howl and the pitch is off.

Warehouse opening is a little shaky. Too much pitch scratchin as well. Dave doesn't sound like that. And again u lose rhythm throughout the choruses and bridges. the vocals especially on Louie, Louie were quite off. U stumble through the section beginning with "that's our blood in there" could never understand what u said.

""What was that thing after warehouse it sounded like garbage.""



now tell me what the difference is again? who is doggin who hard?...I'd say it's pretty even.....go throw yourself a pity party.......

pm me if you want to discuss this further........
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meow :roll:
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