New Original - "Change"

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Sun Mar 28, 2004 5:36 pm

I'm really excited about this one. Like most of my recent work, it seems that this one drifts from my usual style. It's simple ditty that I think is pretty catchy.

http://www.patmcinnis.com/change.mp3

JacknCoke · Post by **JacknCoke** » Sun Mar 28, 2004 9:50 pm

i like, i like it a lot actually..sounds like something i would hear at the end of a song that just keeps on going instrumentally

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 5:45 pm

thanks

I appreciate the feedback.

Lennox · Post by **Lennox** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 6:50 pm

Overall, I think the song is pretty solid and flows together well. I would point out that at 1:43, there really needs to be a small transition into that section. I was really getting into the music and enjoying the patterns and then all of a sudden this spot that didn't sound like it belong was there.

Sheesh · Post by **Sheesh** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 7:06 pm

I'm loving the song man. It's a really pretty ballad that sounds like something that could easily be used to serenade the shit out of your girlfriend!

. The tune kinda reminds me of that song they use in those diamond commercials. I think its for Debeers? Not sure though.

Keep up the good work Pat.

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 7:21 pm

Lennox wrote:Overall, I think the song is pretty solid and flows together well. I would point out that at 1:43, there really needs to be a small transition into that section. I was really getting into the music and enjoying the patterns and then all of a sudden this spot that didn't sound like it belong was there.

i know exactly what you mean. i'm in the process of writing a different bridge now, because i just plain dont like the current one. i dont really like using open chords like that, it just sounds too plain. but yeah, i wrote that really quick, just because i wanted to get the song recorded. honestly, when i plugged in my guitar, i didnt know exactly what i was going to play for the bridge.

katie · Post by **katie** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 9:51 pm

that sounds so sweet.

love speaks the loudest even in silent ways - reverberating the sky escaping time.

really nice, thank you for sharing.

mbgreen · Post by **mbgreen** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 10:06 pm

That song is rad Pat. I sat here and just played neat little melody riffs to it for the last half hour. Fun song man. I dig it a lot...just polish up that transition, and youll be golden.

ElGuitarrista · Post by **ElGuitarrista** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:18 am

This was a nice tune... it's a keeper for my hard drive. I especially like when that slide riff kicks in... like at 0:35. Is that one guitar throughout, or two?

rampaged.congt · Post by **rampaged.congt** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 9:15 am

very nice man...thanks for putting that one online
really smooth and very beautiful...
Damn I can't stop listening to the song...WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!

keep up the good work!

(I'd like to know if that is one guitar throughout or two, too)

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Tue Mar 30, 2004 2:53 pm

Thanks guys.

The song is two guitars, throughout. Keep in mind that I am changing the bridge to it just because...well you know why. It sucks bascially. I want to go over to the studio and record with better quality and possibly with a piano track that comes in later.