I dug up a guitar track I scribbled out a few years ago...

[lyrics101]

Lost as an attachment on an email that's been sitting in my account for Christ knows how long.

It's very Incubus/311ish, I suppose, but parts of it are kinda pretty. It's made to have vocal tracks and perhaps a little solo over the breakdown part, but I never finished it. I do like it, though.

http://synergizement.com/music/jingles.mp3

[mbent4679]

The heavy distorted guitar is a bit interuptive. Like the chord progression it would be nice if I could hear it more clearly. I don't mean take away the distortion mabye just tone it down a little. Is the guitar at the begining what you will make the vocal melody? I think any other melody line with that would clash.