new song: "The Show"

superman0710 · Post by **superman0710** » Sat Dec 06, 2003 4:36 pm

need to add vocals

http://www.rampromotions.com/theshow.mp3

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Easy E · Post by **Easy E** » Sat Dec 06, 2003 4:39 pm

that was incredible, do you have lyrics or do you need some written?

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Sat Dec 06, 2003 5:07 pm

That was an awesome sounding track man , you gotta put vocals on it though , but the rhythm and tone is definetly good , i like it even as an instrumental only , but it would spice it up with vocals , maybe you should lower the electric guitar volume a little bit , its like it takes over too much of the rhythm guitar , specially from 1:30 - 1:53 , tone it down a little bit , thats the only critique i have to say on this one , great job

superman0710 · Post by **superman0710** » Sat Dec 06, 2003 5:21 pm

eze3484 wrote:that was incredible, do you have lyrics or do you need some written?

i barely have lyrics for it yet, i was just fooling with the song structure