First Original - Insomnia

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First Original - Insomnia

Unread post by Easy E » Sat Dec 06, 2003 1:39 am

Hey guys, this is just a short little piece I've been kind of working on, I should probably add more to it but i just wanted to see what people thought so far, enjoy.

http://www.angelfire.com/band2/eze3484/Insomnia.mp3
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Dec 06, 2003 9:29 am

Sounds good to me so far :) Please do post when you get further with it , i would be pleased to listen to it :)

PS are you using some kind of flanger effect on this recording ?
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Sat Dec 06, 2003 5:25 pm

I like the guitar part and the effect used. Your voice sounds good but you seemed to fall flat quite a few times during the song. Keep working on hitting those notes. Also, it seems like you are holding back on the vocals. I think if you really let it out you might be able to hit those notes you are falling flat on.
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