Too Much V-2

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Too Much V-2

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Alright, here's a much more timid version of too much on my Les Paul (so no buzzing strings).

again, fatjack, please post.

http://www.angelfire.com/folk/singer-so ... -timid.mp3
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Post by Xoosh »

hehe it's a little too slow... =) but outside of that... you take it to a jazzy revelatory sort of state... ur vocal part is dead-on =) good job on that... it's so clear... but it's just a little too slow...

no big critiques... it's very solid.

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xoosh, havent seen you in a while...not that you know me or anything
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I did it slow to contrast the fast version, hence also doing it timid in vocals and not harsh.

anyways, thanks :)
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Post by Appfro »

yea a little slow, but personally i liked it. the vocals were good, you may a few troubles w/ falsetto in the beginning, but im not one to talk. great job. MUCH better than the last one on the vocals, but personally i liked the faster guitar better. i think you should have kept the guitar and sang to that w/ this voice. but good job man.
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Post by Ranting Thespian »

inspiered by Appsoldier there, if my throat feels up to it (sore at the moment), I will do the faster guitar with the timid vocals.

still, please reply to this one ;)
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Post by DustyDave »

Vocals were WAYYYYY better in this one bro , not that the other ones were horrible or anything , these just fits in way better , great job on that , guitar part is great , nice job you did on it :)
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Post by fatjack »

i agree that the vocals are much better this time, but overall i think its about the same level

the guitar still sounds sloppy, but its really impossible to make it sound good without a band behind and it was just so slow that it was kinda boring.

the idea of an acoustic too much cover still seems rather helpless...

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