EDIT STUFF: Okay I have an original up now
it's short and i kinda came up with it on the spot...
GO LISTEN!!!!!!!
http://www.shobar.com/J/sarah/sarah_home.html
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yay for bad music
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Wow thats some big buttons you got there 

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it's very delicate, i listened to it 3 times to make sure i was hearing what i thought i heard... the embelishment trills are quite nice, though overused, they are made to make a scene or section POP-OUT and sound brilliant against a drab melody -- by doing it as often as you do you take away from the delicateness and sweetness of the guitar line. the bass notes you hit emphasize the song perfectly. nicely placed and nicely chosen.
overall it's very sweet and soft, but not strong enough to be without vocals. I think a way to fix that would be to add more to it musicwise instead of repeating the same thing over and again... unless you intend to add words later.. if so ignore this comment
i like it overall especially from :33 - :42... which i think are brilliant transitions... use that thought process more =)
regards,
x
overall it's very sweet and soft, but not strong enough to be without vocals. I think a way to fix that would be to add more to it musicwise instead of repeating the same thing over and again... unless you intend to add words later.. if so ignore this comment

i like it overall especially from :33 - :42... which i think are brilliant transitions... use that thought process more =)
regards,
x
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i'll give it a listen next semester, when i'm allowed to have headphones
joking (although thats the god honest truth), i'll whip out the contraband headphones after my 2.5 hours of manditory study are over
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joking (although thats the god honest truth), i'll whip out the contraband headphones after my 2.5 hours of manditory study are over
yay full college experience

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Hey Sarah , nice tune you got going there , reminds me of some summer times 

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