yay for bad music

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Wed Dec 03, 2003 6:30 pm

EDIT STUFF: Okay I have an original up now
it's short and i kinda came up with it on the spot...
GO LISTEN!!!!!!!

http://www.shobar.com/J/sarah/sarah_home.html

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Wed Dec 03, 2003 6:53 pm

Wow thats some big buttons you got there

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Thu Dec 04, 2003 8:04 pm

yes.
yes they are.

Xoosh · Post by **Xoosh** » Thu Dec 04, 2003 8:34 pm

it's very delicate, i listened to it 3 times to make sure i was hearing what i thought i heard... the embelishment trills are quite nice, though overused, they are made to make a scene or section POP-OUT and sound brilliant against a drab melody -- by doing it as often as you do you take away from the delicateness and sweetness of the guitar line. the bass notes you hit emphasize the song perfectly. nicely placed and nicely chosen.

overall it's very sweet and soft, but not strong enough to be without vocals. I think a way to fix that would be to add more to it musicwise instead of repeating the same thing over and again... unless you intend to add words later.. if so ignore this comment

i like it overall especially from :33 - :42... which i think are brilliant transitions... use that thought process more =)

regards,
x

chosta · Post by **chosta** » Thu Dec 04, 2003 8:59 pm

i'll give it a listen next semester, when i'm allowed to have headphones

joking (although thats the god honest truth), i'll whip out the contraband headphones after my 2.5 hours of manditory study are over

yay full college experience

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Fri Dec 05, 2003 1:19 am

Hey Sarah , nice tune you got going there , reminds me of some summer times