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Unread post by fatjack » Tue Dec 02, 2003 8:03 pm

im confused, how is that intro the deed is done or anyone seen the bridge? its the little thing at the end of Pig on BTCS...
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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Tue Dec 02, 2003 10:59 pm

ok ok, here's a few things. The intro was the outro jam thing of Pig on BTCS. That outro starts out with stefan and dave playing the bass part of ASTB and then going into a riff that I havn't heard before, then deed is done, and that's the end of the jam. And since it has the ASTB part, I thought it would sound good as an intro to Too Much.

Now, for my singing voice, I have NEVER tried to sing like dave, and I never plan too. I don't think I have ever sounded like him in any song I've done. I like my sinigng voice. Also, I tried to sound snarling and such, I wanted to go that direction, a nasty one. I was also doing it playfully , so I don't mind if you laughed. I am going to record a relaxed clean one right now, see what that turns out to be.
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Unread post by Xoosh » Wed Dec 03, 2003 8:37 am

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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Dec 03, 2003 12:46 pm

Great job. I liked the intro, I liked the fills. You can definitely feel your songs. Good choice too. Hardly anyone has done too much.

Three criticisms: It was too fast ...tone it down a notch. Cool intro, but practice up on it. There was a lot of extra noise/mishits in there. The bridge wasnt right, or it was just sloppy. I'm not sure which. Other than that, nice cover.
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Unread post by DJR » Wed Dec 03, 2003 2:10 pm

yeah man i know you like the (for lack of a better word) rough sound especially after listening to your halloween, but that might have been a bit 'too much' on the intense side, personally i would like the whole song in the singing style of when you hit the high notes on the actual phrase "too much"
but i really like the intro and most of the guitar work
can't wait to hear the next version :D

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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Dec 03, 2003 5:48 pm

that intro doesn't sounde like the deed is done at all... im still confused
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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Thu Dec 04, 2003 1:18 am

fatjack wrote:that intro doesn't sounde like the deed is done at all... im still confused
Fatjack, IM me when you see me on next, and I will show you exactly where the deed is done part in the jam is.
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