"Sleep" New Original

TimmyJ4140 · Post by **TimmyJ4140** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:47 am

I like it Mitch. It sounds like it's got extreme potential to become an incredibly passion-filled piece. Nothing really to critique, just clean it up a little bit (change just the little things, transitions and such); I'd love to hear a full band arrangement of this. Keep it up bro.

Gold · Post by **Gold** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 4:08 am

awesome guitar, awesome voice. a bit cliché lyrics. I wish I could sing like you (and play like you

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on another note, I just noticed earlier today that Mitch Meadows is on my last.fm list of overall top artists

Cor · Post by **Cor** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:52 am

I don't have time now, but I'm excited to listen later.

Cor · Post by **Cor** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:30 am

Double

Cor · Post by **Cor** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:30 am

Cor wrote:I don't have time now, but I'm excited to listen later.

As promised, a review.

I also admire those who write songs. It's something I never really developed. I've always practice my ability to hear, figure out, and execute different pieces. Maybe it's why I'm so into jazz.

I like the chord progression. I like chorus, especially the end, the last line is great "No greater moment..." etc.

Maybe a little long, like everyone said. The bridge is cool. It sounds like this song is the acoustic version of a song done full-band. Like someone else said, it'd be cool to hear it in a band setting.

No other critiques. Cool song, Apps.