First Original

Jakis · Post by **Jakis** » Mon Nov 27, 2006 12:47 pm

This is something that me and my roomate wrote quickly the other day. Just a simple rythm. I want to add some lyrics too it and record it again. Because we just wanted to get it down to remember it and therefore, screwed up a few times. What do you guys think though? Is it a good start?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/qqd177

cheers,

Jake

Jakis · Post by **Jakis** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 10:35 pm

No one?

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 10:46 pm

i think you'd be better off posting once you have lyrics. i know that's what made me uninterested. no offense, i just wouldn't post a song unless it was complete

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:48 pm

i agree with apps. i listen to every complete original in this forum that doesnt somehow slip past me, but i have a hard time getting an opinion on backing instrumentals.

polish er' up and post again plz