Christmas Song

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Christmas Song

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hi
this is my first cover. please comment thanks!

http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/trebor0/robxmas.mp3
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trebor wrote:hi
this is my first cover. please comment thanks!

http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/trebor0/robxmas.mp3
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great voice pare. shocked!
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yo pare ganda pala voice mo! kaw kasi di ka kumamakanta pag jamming tayo eh. sa december kaw naman kakanta pre! hehe 8)
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kahit bola pare salamt:P. ikaw unang nagsabi sa akin niyan and makes me happy
bat hindi sila nagcocomment????

i wish other people would comment... i know it sucks but any critiscism would really be appreciated. hint hint:P
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I enjoyed listening to this one , your voice is on key , the guitar playing is smooth , except from during the chorus part , it sounds like you're losing a little rhythm there , and the single notes picking in the end are a little off , besides that its a really good cover , maybe try recording it at a higher volume as well , it was a little low , overall a good cover :)
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ide liek to hear it man but its suspended
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damn angelfire, why does it do this? i did not post any new songs in my website? what can i do?
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It has always been a problem with angelfire , but i uploaded it to my server so mastermindmatthews could listen to it , i hope you don't mind , also if other wanna hear it , i'll leave it on my server for a day or so , here is the link

Christmas Song
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hey great job first off....good singing, good guitar...there is definitely a lag on the guitar playing, it was too slow at times. you sang with your own voice too which is good. I would like to hear from you boi!
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DmbFanJason wrote:there is definitely a lag on the guitar playing, it was too slow at times
Ok then it ain't me hearing things
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Post by Appfro »

guitar was solid, yea, a little slow during the chorus. you should work on that, it kinda throws you off. vocals were on key, a little soft though, you should belt out a little more.

good job.
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