Post recordings you have made here and get feedback from the community. Songwriting topics would also reside here.
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muzak
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by muzak »
Good vocal;
)To me( the song needs a chorus and bridge, or at least a bridge.
Something to break up the repetition...
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AustinG
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by AustinG »
good vocals and nice idea. Recording is less than great and the guitar sounds a little shaky.
I agree with the previous poster, I'd like to hear something to break it up.. but good idea and I like the tone of the vocals.
