I'm so weird.

[fatjack]

I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff

thanks for saying it so i didn't have to

[Speenis]

I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff

thanks for saying it so i didn't have to

i think ur gonna be gettin a slap across the forehead for that one!

[geekmug]

no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.

Just 'cause I can't do it doesn't mean I don't know what sounds good, and ultimately that's all that matters. But flame me, as you will.

thanks for saying it so i didn't have to

What can I say, I am a gluten for punishment..

singing that dramatically is the only way I can hit those notes

Well, as Trippin so keenly wanted to point out, I can't either But besides, I think maybe with a proper vocal mic/rack setup the dramatics would sound fine, and are probably even approriate.

[fatjack]

I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff

thanks for saying it so i didn't have to

i think ur gonna be gettin a slap across the forehead for that one!

or she can be cool and understanding like she always is...

[Trippin Hillbilly]

no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.

Just 'cause I can't do it doesn't mean I don't know what sounds good, and ultimately that's all that matters. But flame me, as you will.

well it seemed like you were just flaming Sarah cause everyone else was praising her and that's just not right.......too dramatic? come on..

[borocks]

no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.

Just 'cause I can't do it doesn't mean I don't know what sounds good, and ultimately that's all that matters. But flame me, as you will.

well it seemed like you were just flaming Sarah cause everyone else was praising her and that's just not right.......too dramatic? come on..

I don't think he was flaming her, but as you said he might not be the right one to criticize Sarah's vocals.

let's chill.

[fatjack]

no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.

Just 'cause I can't do it doesn't mean I don't know what sounds good, and ultimately that's all that matters. But flame me, as you will.

well it seemed like you were just flaming Sarah cause everyone else was praising her and that's just not right.......too dramatic? come on..

she knows exactly what i think of her singing and playing, and i know exactly what she thinks of mine.

i've said this same thing about firedancer's recordings and how everyone responded. continually praising and giving nothing but positive feedback will NEVER help someone get better. pointing out weaknesses or saying what you thought could be done better will help someone a lot more than just saying "sounds great!", "great job", or "you're gonna be famous!"

[Speenis]

I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff

thanks for saying it so i didn't have to

i think ur gonna be gettin a slap across the forehead for that one!

or she can be cool and understanding like she always is...

yeah, but what is a message board without drama????
oh wait, thats a good thing isn't it?

[indigo]

Ive never herd the original but it seems like a really cool song.
I was impressed by your playing, very clean and precise. If theres just one thing i would comment on is the singing, although your voice is really good, it would come out better if you moderated it a bit. I mean when itsa quiet part youd be real quiet and when its a lous part youd be hella loud. Just some where in between would be great.
Anyway thats just me, over all i think its great, i enjoyed listening to it

jp

[fatjack]

Ive never herd the original but it seems like a really cool song.
I was impressed by your playing, very clean and precise. If theres just one thing i would comment on is the singing, although your voice is really good, it would come out better if you moderated it a bit. I mean when itsa quiet part youd be real quiet and when its a lous part youd be hella loud. Just some where in between would be great.
Anyway thats just me, over all i think its great, i enjoyed listening to it

jp

you think it would be better if she had no dynamics??