Appsoldier wrote:im truely jealous of your talent. i have no suggestions on how you could improve.
do you write? if not, find a writer, cause you need to make a demo.
they "hey hey" part gave me chill bumps...seriously.
when you make it, will you not forget your friends
i think i heard some rhythm slips (but it was during quiet parts, im pretty sure it was just the recording skipping)
wow sarah. i wish i knew you cause id make you play for me all the time. hell, id make you give me lessons this was another superb cover.
thanks appsy I can't write, though
SomeDevil0879 wrote:You are unbelievable. Will you marry me?
if your name is fatjack
DustyDave wrote:That was very beautiful .... What tab did you use for that one ?
i didn't use a tab...i hardly ever do
fatjack wrote:how does it feel to have all those lips on your ass sarah?
shut up?
thanks guys
but just wait til I post an original...you will take everything back
I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p
I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..
ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p
I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..
ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good
good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p
I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..
ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good
good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p
I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..
ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good
good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p
I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..
ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good
good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice.
lol hey Trippin , long time no see eh
DUSTY!! You're back! What's going on? Where ya been?
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p
I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..
ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good
good stuff
singing that dramatically is the only way I can hit those notes ...
Thank you very much, geekmug.
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