New original

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 11:08 pm

it's called "Tell". I did it using my synth and Cool edit, but it turned out pretty much how I wanted it to sound.

let me know what you think

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 1B7BFCE74C

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 11:13 pm

amazing. the buildup is awesome, vocals are awesome, lyrics are awesome. i can't think of one bad thing to say about this song. this will be an encore opener when we get rich and famous

you start it, rest of the band members come out while you're playing and slowly build up the song.

Nitro1515 · Post by **Nitro1515** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 1:09 am

Sounded straight out of the 80's, and I loved it. Great vocals, lyrics, melody. Nice work Sarah

sfmartins · Post by **sfmartins** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:28 am

Sarah, are you a pro?!

This sounded really great! Voice, melody, progression...

I am really impressed and this is jumping into my iTunes!

Congratulations!

i-am-me · Post by **i-am-me** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 8:45 pm

nice job sarah. i really enjoyed it!

katie · Post by **katie** » Fri Sep 15, 2006 12:37 am

super pretty sarah, sweet and soft ~ thanks for letting me hear your work. It turned out really good!

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Fri Sep 15, 2006 10:53 am

oh yea sarah. i decided this wasn't good enough the way it was so i added some cow bell. i figured since i did that you would be ok w/ me editing my name into the artist tag instead. cow bell is a lot of hard work afterall.

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Fri Sep 15, 2006 11:48 am

thanks guys

and thank you especially, apps

Cor · Post by **Cor** » Fri Sep 15, 2006 1:54 pm

Pretty cool. I like the vocal at 0:52.

bassman462 · Post by **bassman462** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 9:04 pm

I really like it. I haven't heard much of your other stuff I'd like to now after hearing this.

onid41 · Post by **onid41** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 9:05 pm

Sars this was good stuff!

myxomatosis · Post by **myxomatosis** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 12:38 am

PRETTY

TimmyJ4140 · Post by **TimmyJ4140** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 12:46 am

Very pretty Sars, I like the vocal harmonies. If only I could hear that beautiful voice of yours a little more, it'd be perfect.

GreedylilPig · Post by **GreedylilPig** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 11:19 am

Fine work, Sarah. This would be a perfect last track on an album... sort of a "goodnight" song, if that makes sense.

Recording quality seems to be getting better with each new recording you post. It seems like with each recording, you're one step closer to a professional studio. Just a matter of time.

Fantastic melody, very original. Vocals/harmonies work perfect with the style of the composition.

Always looking forward to more.

Can you please post the lyrics?

NoNotThat · Post by **NoNotThat** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 4:05 pm

thanks a lot guys

here are the lyrics, Brian

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Did you tell stories?
Were they clever?
Did you leave me out,
Or did you do me in?

Did you make it a habit
To make excuses
For misbehavior on my part?
To challenge my bruises?

Did you open your mouth?
Revealing my secrets
And with every word
The depth of your weakness?

Shamelessly, tell

How I inspired disgust in you
When I put all of my trust in you
It's a matter of points of view
When you tell it like you do