Well, it really isn't my first original, but it is the first original i am posting on this board. Also, it is the first song that I have wrote that I haven't really hated a week after I wrote it . The title of the song is change (at least for now until I can think of something better). and i'm still working on my vocals so if they suck ya know why (only been trying to sing for a couple months now). Well, enough of that, give it a listen and tell me what ya think http://www.angelfire.com/music5/horsmar15/
Oh ya, one thing I forgot to add in the original post. I know my vocals don't sound right, but the thing is I am really not sure how to make them better. Can anyone who listens to any of my recordings, tell me what I am doing wrong and possibly how to fix it. Thanks!
. The title of the song is change (at least for now until I can think of something better). and i'm still working on my vocals so if they suck ya know why (only been trying to sing for a couple months now). Well, enough of that, give it a listen and tell me what ya think
(not that my cigarette voice is any better)