Three New Originals

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:30 pm

So, after almost 9 months w/o writing a single song, i decided to sit down and write something shitty and easy. and w/ that came three new songs. these are for the most part, sit down play and sing at the same time single recordings, so this post isn't really for quality or production, more for putting the new ones out there and seeing if you guys like them

So, i present, the W's.

1. Where Did I Go Wrong
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 575A90A777
This was the easy piece that i wrote strictly to write something new. Not saying the others are amazing or anything, but this one was written in literally like 10 minutes.

2. Who's To Blame
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 5941CD31C4
This song was written about a family i know that went through a bunch of hardships one after another. a good family, and i couldn't believe the shit that was piled on top of these people.
it's way overproduced. I recorded it, rerecorded it and then had to use the vocals over another music piece caues people came home are making too much noise for me to rerecord it so that's why it sounds a bit weird. Sorry for that. it's by far my fav of the three though, so i hope you enjoy it. again, sorry for the bad production and the clicking, i'm trying to get used to my DD-6 and Wah pedal and playing over myself.

3. What's Right In Front Of You
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... CC477EA331
Easy listening good feeling song. Hope you like it.

stoca2 · Post by **stoca2** » Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:59 pm

i like What's right in front of you

myxomatosis · Post by **myxomatosis** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:39 pm

didn't like the first one... liked the others though, nice job

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Thu Jun 22, 2006 9:57 pm

thepackage0 wrote:didn't like the first one... liked the others though, nice job

thanks. i'm not sure i like the first one either. but i'm not going to give up on it yet. i've found that my favorites are definitetly not other people's favorites so who knows? what do you think i could do to make it better?

on another note, not many people post in this forum anymore huh?

myxomatosis · Post by **myxomatosis** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:18 am

Appfro wrote:on another note, not many people post in this forum anymore huh?

yeah, when I first came here I spent most of my time here... but once you've heard 30 covers of #41 it gets kind of old.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 7:33 am

yea, but you'd think people would be a little more psyched about originals. oh well. maybe i should have put the sucky one last

they're listening to that one and then deleting the other two.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 8:46 am

I listened to them. Well, I couldn't make it through Who's To Blame. It was just too long.

I like the idea of just sitting down and writing anything. Even if you think it's shit, it's something and helps to get out of a slump, but you know that already.

I really liked what's in front of you. Good stuff.

HumbleMonkey · Post by **HumbleMonkey** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 1:09 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:I listened to them. Well, I couldn't make it through Who's To Blame. It was just too long.

I like the idea of just sitting down and writing anything. Even if you think it's shit, it's something and helps to get out of a slump, but you know that already.

I really liked what's in front of you. Good stuff.

totally agree, just writing anything is good, your bound to have at least one good line in what you write. and then stuff just develops

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Fri Jun 23, 2006 4:21 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:I listened to them. Well, I couldn't make it through Who's To Blame. It was just too long.

I like the idea of just sitting down and writing anything. Even if you think it's shit, it's something and helps to get out of a slump, but you know that already.

I really liked what's in front of you. Good stuff.

thanks for listening. i'll work on making the solo on who's to blame shorter and more interesting.

Kahn · Post by **Kahn** » Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:17 pm

1) Not that good. Not bad, just not great
2) Like the vocal melody, very nice
3) Cool Tune

Not much to say except keep it up

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 3:13 am

It's late, so all I can think to say is that it was good when you sang your ass off towards the end, that sounded great and you could feel the emotion in it.

Chosta's Grandma · Post by **Chosta's Grandma** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:00 am

I hated all of them

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:08 am

Chosta's Grandma wrote:I hated all of them