****Grace Is Gone*****- First Recording

little ants734 · Post by **little ants734** » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:04 pm

Hey guys any feedback on this recording would be great. Let me know why you guys think.. Thanks

http://download.yousendit.com/764E10E805641133

You should turn the bass down all the way when you listen to this cause my vocals have a high volume and bass.. sorry

p1trick_82 · Post by **p1trick_82** » Mon May 01, 2006 12:51 am

sounds great

u have a real cool voice...u nailed the "one more drink" part

what recording gear/guitar do you use?

jaroben · Post by **jaroben** » Mon May 01, 2006 1:10 am

You've got a really good voice. I liked when you built up at "one more drink", like p1trick said. If you can sing with that aggression throughout the whole song, that would make it even better, IMO. Good guitar work as well.

6_strings_for_life · Post by **6_strings_for_life** » Mon May 01, 2006 9:53 am

yea your guitar work is spot on, sounds like dave himself. The singing is also good, I enjoyed listening to this, thanks for posting...

little ants734 · Post by **little ants734** » Mon May 01, 2006 11:32 am

thats guys I appreciate the feedback. My guitar is a martin DX1 with a matrix nat ii. For the computer I use this m-audio device that i plug my guitar in and a shitty recording program that came with it.

eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Mon May 01, 2006 11:42 am

Listening right now. Like said already the guitar was right on and sounded great. You have a good voice but the vocals seemed muffled.

little ants734 · Post by **little ants734** » Tue May 02, 2006 12:49 pm

anyone else have any feedback i would love to hear anything you guys got

little ants734 · Post by **little ants734** » Wed May 03, 2006 9:44 pm

no oneee...

Grachi · Post by **Grachi** » Thu May 04, 2006 6:17 pm

Pretty impressive stuff I must say

Strengths: Great guitar playing like mentioned this is really great. Solid vocals and the "feel" of the song was there the whole way. Great great job.
Especially around 3:25-3:35 mark you can tell your really into it at that point

Weakness: I can't really think of any! I really liked this all around wonderful job

9.5/10

little ants734 · Post by **little ants734** » Tue May 16, 2006 10:11 pm

lots of views, any more critiques?

mattinbeloit · Post by **mattinbeloit** » Wed May 17, 2006 4:27 pm

Not too bad, guitar was good, I don't see many ppl. play this right and you did it. The voice was ok, sing from your chest, it was comming through your nose a lot of the time, you have a much better voice locked up in there somewere, get that bitch out. Good job, keep it up.

proudestmonkey41 · Post by **proudestmonkey41** » Thu May 18, 2006 5:23 pm

mattinbeloit wrote:Not too bad, guitar was good, I don't see many ppl. play this right and you did it. The voice was ok, sing from your chest, it was comming through your nose a lot of the time, you have a much better voice locked up in there somewere, get that bitch out. Good job, keep it up.

i dont wanna steal this thread.. so mr mattinbeloit, orr anyone else who can answer this, if you could pm a reply i would really appreciate it... now my question is, i have probably the worst singing voice ever, and i've been really trying to strengthen my lungs by doin some exercises that were posted on this website. if someone could just let me know a good way to be sure that i am breathing properly from my chest/diaphragm(sp). i.e. chest expansion,, belly risin somethin like that thanks alot!

and in terms of your recording i enjoyed the "how could i" i always get a kick out of that part for some reason. i agree the guitar work is very well done, and you have a good voice, but it did seem muffled at time.. probably just the recording though. and like everyone else said the "one more drink" has good passion. i would love to hear that through out the song.
keep posting recordings! especially ones you can really get into!

little ants734 · Post by **little ants734** » Thu May 18, 2006 11:41 pm

thanks i appreiate it.. i do agree my voice does seem mufffled i wish i could bring it out more, i guess i'm just having problems.. does anyone have any suggestions? Proudestmonkey let me know if anyone repsonds to your request of knowif you are breathing right from the chest/diaphragm.. i would like to know just as much.

Thanks

proudestmonkey41 · Post by **proudestmonkey41** » Mon May 22, 2006 11:59 am

i'll let you know if i get a reply from anyone... anyone?

6_strings_for_life · Post by **6_strings_for_life** » Mon May 22, 2006 5:14 pm

could i get this re-uped?

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Grace Is Gone*- First Recording

Grace Is Gone*- First Recording