Song from my demo

AdamCU81 · Post by **AdamCU81** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 5:02 pm

I finally got this up on IUMA after sending my demo into the copyright office. This song is called Rise & Fall:

http://artists.iuma.com/site-bin/mp3gen ... __Fall.mp3

Please tell me what you think. thanks

-adam

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 6:09 pm

wow! damn! holy crap. i love this kind of stuff. you were the one that did the baby cover, right? (im itaketwosteps from ants)

anyway, i thought it was excellent. you voice is unique, in a very good way.

the vocals were spot on, i loved it.

thank you.

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 6:12 pm

this song really isn't my kinda thing, but you played and sung it very well, it was mixed very well and the sound quality was top-notch

the only thing i didn't really like was the delay on your vocals. it was cool for a little bit, but then it got distracting. maybe if it was just in the beginning of the song

AdamCU81 · Post by **AdamCU81** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:50 pm

Thanks dmbguitar718 and Fatjack! Yea I did the baby cover...it's still up on IUMA I think. And Fatjack, I appreciate your honesty and comment. I agree that the echo gets annoying toward the end, but I didn't feel like just adding it to the end of phrases (which is where I think it sounds cool). I made my demo for a drummer friend of mine. He'll be coming up with some snazzy beats for a "full band" demo.....this song will be much more refined for that.

Ando · Post by **Ando** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 11:02 pm

Great Stuff man, Everyone sounds great...

Although... I am with Fatjack on the Vocal-delay deal. Otherwise I dig it! You've got a great voice man..