One Sweet World

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you did quite nicely my friend, everything was pretty tight, but i have two pieces of advice for you

you played everything at a steady tempo and you were right on with the rhythm, but you lacked in percussive accent with the main riff. the song lacked in real beat because you didn't put any percussive hits to accent the beat, it just felt empty this way

as for the second piece of advice, your voice was on key for the majority of the song (you only went off a little when you hit the high notes). your voice sounded really restricted and kind of nasally. it seemed as if you were restricting your breath a good bit. also the reverb on your vocals was a tad bit excessive

overall you did quite well and you played pretty solidly

you get a 6.75/10 :D
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Its called a foster Mr 8. its a cheap 8 track. kinda cheap. what kinda stuff u guys record with?
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freshead16 wrote:Its called a foster Mr 8. its a cheap 8 track. kinda cheap. what kinda stuff u guys record with?
i have the same thing :D

do you have the file manager for the computer? that makes the MR-8 a lot more useful
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sweet, is that a pretty popular recorder? how does that computer program make it more useful? no i dont have it by the way. But i mean what are its pluses. fill me in on that dude, i might look into that. also what memory size card u have? i was thinkinga bout getting the bigger one.
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freshead16 wrote:sweet, is that a pretty popular recorder? how does that computer program make it more useful? no i dont have it by the way. But i mean what are its pluses. fill me in on that dude, i might look into that. also what memory size card u have? i was thinkinga bout getting the bigger one.
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with the program, you dont need a bigger card :D (but mine is the 256MB that came with it)

the program allows you to take individual tracks off of the recorder without bouncing or converting into a wav file. this means you can record without worrying about saving room for bouncing and converting (which takes up a lot of room)

but you also need a program that mixes audio files for it to really be worthwhile.

don't buy another card! a 1GB SmartMedia card costs almost 1000 bucks, and most dont even work with the recorder. use the program and get a file mixing program and you will have unlimited freedom with your recorder

if you have any question just ask or IM me
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Post by tjmac66pc »

nice job...sounded fantastic
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Post by flintman »

wow that was sweet
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Post by JTR101 »

Excellent job.......especially for playing for just over a year :) ! Took me forever to be able to sing and play
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