One Sweet World

freshead16 · Post by **freshead16** » Sun Oct 19, 2003 2:25 pm

i thought id try this one too. i get off rythm in a few spots but who cares. i dont. let me know what u think.
peace http://www.angelfire.com/zine2/freshead ... _cover.mp3

borocks · Post by **borocks** » Sun Oct 19, 2003 4:27 pm

didn't work dude

dixiechicken · Post by **dixiechicken** » Sun Oct 19, 2003 11:02 pm

Nice job - how long you been playin' for?

taylordb · Post by **taylordb** » Sun Oct 19, 2003 11:12 pm

Nicely done!

freshead16 · Post by **freshead16** » Sun Oct 19, 2003 11:52 pm

thanks guys, its not the best but thought id post it anyways. ive been playing for a little over a year. 1 year 2 months. my voice kinda sounds plugged but im working on that. ahhaha. i try to do a little more whispering when i sing. it actually helps i think. but anyways thanks for feedback.
peace

barcode · Post by **barcode** » Mon Oct 20, 2003 7:11 am

good job! i'm coming up pn my one year anniversary of playing and i can't even sing and play at the same time so thumbs up to you bro

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Oct 20, 2003 7:57 pm

damn. thats AWESOME for one year. great job.

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Mon Oct 20, 2003 7:58 pm

guitar - the intro's beat was a little off, but that's a really weird beat to keep up. the rest of the playing was excellent i liked the second guitar track too.

vocal - you sing on key. but you sing a little through your nose too much. you kinda sound like you should be singing in a boy band. doesn't mean your bad, just means you should try to open your mouth and no breathe through your nose so much when you sing. but you have a really good voice. there were also a few too many effects on your voice, try going natural.

overall a pretty good job. you could use a little practice, but who couldn't. good job man, keep it up.

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 4:14 pm

just curious - what kind of strings are you using?

freshead16 · Post by **freshead16** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 5:05 pm

if your talkin to me, at the time i was using extremely dead D Addario lights. Thats why the sound wasnt that bright at all. For the past few months though i only use Elixer lights poly.

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 9:36 pm

yeah cause i liked what you did with it but i wanted to ask cause i thought they sounded off - gotta love the poly's though - i just switched and man do they make my guitar sound nice
good job overall

borocks · Post by **borocks** » Wed Oct 22, 2003 8:06 am

I finally managed to download it... I think there's been a prob with my dl-accelerator..

listening while I type.
Intro sounds good to me. You kept the rhythm which I've probs with...
verse sounds not as full as Dave's. That's probably because, you seem to pick the single notes, I'd rather strum all the stings and mute those who aren't played. That might improve the rhythm of the verse as well. ... chorus sounds really good to me, ... bridge sounds awesome, the rhythm is hard to do, you managed well though.
second chorus sounds good to me... 2nd guitar is not 100%ly accurate from the point of view of the timing here and there, sounds sweet though
vocals are quite good, you stayed in key. but you might wanna put a little bit more energy into them.

Good job over all, in fact, it's better than the one I used to post some months ago.

Question to you: how did you achive such a good sound quality?

freshead16 · Post by **freshead16** » Wed Oct 22, 2003 3:43 pm

thatnks for the review man. i bought a mini 8 track recorder this summer. it was bout 350 bucks. not a bad deal to me. Thats how i got the sound quality (whether good or bad in peoples opinion).

themaker · Post by **themaker** » Wed Oct 22, 2003 8:43 pm

great job dude. really liked it. keep it up

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Wed Oct 22, 2003 8:45 pm

freshead16 wrote:thatnks for the review man. i bought a mini 8 track recorder this summer. it was bout 350 bucks. not a bad deal to me. Thats how i got the sound quality (whether good or bad in peoples opinion).

what kind did you get?