Jason......what's up, man............you know I think your playing kicks ass and you've given me some great tips lately, but......knowing your ability I know you can pump a little more into the chorus. Just a bit more strumming would do the job. Otherwise, everything sounds great.....I'm always amazed people can sing and play at the same time, especially this one over that sick opening riff/verse.
Awesome job, SMTS and Billies are great. I hope i can play the guitar like you some day. Lyrics could be a little a louder but i really have no room to criticize. I've only been playing the gutiar since this summer and still have a lot to learn. Hopfully one day i'll be able to play Billies like that and get out the words, must take a lot of work. Again, great job, thought you did really well on those two songs.
Dude don't be over critical of yourself. You're are way ahead than some of us. Atleast you can freakin sing man. Some people can't even hit the right notes vocally. Some can't sing and play at the same time. So considering your age I think you are doing just fine. There are parts in the chorus that were choppy, not that big of a deal. Your talent exceeds your recording that much is apparent...
I do have a lot of original guitar riffs, but they are so boring...I want to play DAVE!...I know, some day I will have to get over trying to be Dave...lol, but i think i might actually do that Udied, and work more on original...thanks for the comments all!...peace.