originial

bassman462 · Post by **bassman462** » Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:30 pm

this is an originial i wrote on guitar, ive been working on it alot lately, and i just want to get some feedback with what i got. there's like a small little solo thing in there that i dont know if im going to do or not. its really repetitive since there's no lyrics or anything. but its only like 3:00 minutes.

EDIT- o ya cat stevens directly influenced this song pretty much.

http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=09G5 ... FH6XKX8GG2

bassman462 · Post by **bassman462** » Fri Mar 03, 2006 3:20 pm

ok, i guess not.

J_Clark · Post by **J_Clark** » Tue Mar 07, 2006 3:43 pm

Sounds cool. But that kind of guitar playing I beleive would fit better with lyrics. To me, it does not sound like a solo song. A would suggest adding in lyrics.