take it easy on me PLEASE. only been playing a couple months and i just bought the acid studio program yesterday, still havent figured out editing on it. be gentle
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I'm checking it out right now. If possible you may want to encode it to an mp3 to make the size smaller and more attractive to other potential listeners.
It's really quiet, I noticed. maybe bump up the levels.
The intro transitioning into the chord strumming was a little disjointed.
If you could write a little melody line for it, it would be more apealing. Considering you've been playing a couple of months, it's about what I expected.
Keep it up, you're on your way.
It's really quiet, I noticed. maybe bump up the levels.
The intro transitioning into the chord strumming was a little disjointed.
If you could write a little melody line for it, it would be more apealing. Considering you've been playing a couple of months, it's about what I expected.
Keep it up, you're on your way.
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The finger picked part really reminds me of Matt Nathanson's Angel. This is nice, little GCD progression?
Your rhythm falters sometimes, try recording with a metronome, it works wonders.
Do you have lyrics yet?
Good Job, keep posting
Your rhythm falters sometimes, try recording with a metronome, it works wonders.
Do you have lyrics yet?
Good Job, keep posting
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