Reflection in The Dirt

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:43 pm

Listening now.. are you on the right or wrong speaker?

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:48 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Listening now.. are you on the right or wrong speaker?

Huh?

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:53 pm

It's interesting. I like it, nice structure in the song. Doesn't get repetitive.
Some constructive criticism:
I think it lacks a hook, something to remember the song by. If that makes sense.
Also, the vocals aren't bad but there's alot of off notes. I'd get rid of the delay on the vocals at the end.

Good song though.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:54 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Listening now.. are you on the right or wrong speaker?
Huh?

Was making a funny. I meant are you on the left or right speaker...

You_Enjoy_Myself · Post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:55 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:It's interesting. I like it, nice structure in the song. Doesn't get repetitive.
Some constructive criticism:
I think it lacks a hook, something to remember the song by. If that makes sense.
Also, the vocals aren't bad but there's alot of off notes. I'd get rid of the delay on the vocals at the end.

Good song though.

That makes a lot of sense actually Miguel, because I feel the same way.

As for the off notes here and there, my buddy just wasn't feelin' it. I'm sure, you've felt the same way

Thanks for the critique.