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Here is a live song me and my band played a month ago or so. I wasnt aware, but apparently our bassist set that up. Its me on lead, a friend not actually part of the band on ryhthm, then bass, and drums. We rarely play the song because for one, I just dont like it all the time haha. It comes off as too Cortez the Killer imo. Sorry for the incompatent soloing. But I try

http://s13.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0CJA ... XTSWZ7T0OQ


EDIT: You know, if you download it.....Id hope to hear some feedback
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Common, 77 and nothing. Please.
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Post by waffle_house_jam »

Hey, I thought it was pretty good. I thought your lead playing was good, it didn't get boring or anything, there was enough variation to keep me interested, it was pretty solid. Bass seemed to be going pretty groovy too.
I thought it was a bit too long without changing intensity that much...perhaps some sort of bridge and more emphasis on the swells would make it better.
Keep up the good work.
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Post by Kahn »

I enjoyed the solo. Hardly incompetent. Maybe some lyrics would have spiced it up.
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Beauford33 wrote:Common, 77 and nothing. Please.
That seems to be the trend lately..not sure why. I haven't listened yet, but I will and I'll leave you some feed back. :)
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I thought your solo was great. Definitely has variation. I don't have a whole lot to critique.. everything sounded good.
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Thanks guys. I appreciate all the comments. As for Kahn, I agree with bridge. But as of right now this just kind of a jam thing we do to get into a groove. And not that I dont like it, there are other songs that need developing.
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http://s10.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2WUE ... 6WQ56WL5TP


Another song. Apporiately named Simmering Ocean ahaha, its kinda obvious why if you are aware of those two songs. Oh well. Again, me on lead. I suck at Wah....so yea, I try.


Please give me some feedback though. Any at all is very much appreciated.
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