Run Away - An Original

Too Step · Post by **Too Step** » Sat Dec 03, 2005 8:15 pm

Hi i'd appreciate it if some of you folks could take a listen to a song i just wrote and recorded and give me a little critiqing

http://www.soundclick.com/chrisoliver

Thanks

Too Step · Post by **Too Step** » Wed Dec 14, 2005 7:59 pm

Anyone?

sunglassesatnight · Post by **sunglassesatnight** » Wed Dec 14, 2005 10:19 pm

I really dig it. There where a couple times that your voice could be a little better timed with the changes. I think the sort of ostinato bass figure is very well suited for this song. Good lyrics too. Clean it up just a bit and it would be superb.

deceptivehero · Post by **deceptivehero** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 4:24 am

You do miss a bit with the timing of singing and playing, but if you clean that up I think it would be very good. I really dig your sound, thought it was very cool.

RunsWithBuffalo · Post by **RunsWithBuffalo** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 7:38 pm

Vocals are good, right out in front where they should be. The mix is a little off, i would like to hear a little treble, the bass seemed to be a bit over powering, my sub was going nuts. That guitar part is so intricate and cool, i would like to hear more of it.

good song, keep it up!