Crash! Burn! Oh the horror!

Bedurndurn · Post by **Bedurndurn** » Thu Sep 25, 2003 6:59 pm

So I recorded a cover for Crash, but if my past covers have been any indication I should skip the "Do you like it?" and go straight to "Okay, what'd I fuck up now?"

So here it is
http://www.angelfire.com/falcon/bedurnd ... shTest.mp3

So... umm.. what'd I fuck up this time?

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Thu Sep 25, 2003 11:14 pm

dude, don't be so hard on yourself. its really not that bad.

guitar: good rhythm, stayed on beat, played almost flawlessly. a little rough on the "into me" part, but that's a hard part to play. overall, guitar was very good, i don't know what ive heard from you in the past, but the way you describe it, it was a disaster. this was really good

vocals: really, you were on key about 70 percent of the time. you had some problems staying in, but nothing that couldn't be fixed very easily w/ some practice. especially on the "when i come intoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you" part, it was kind of a coin toss, but you got it more times than you didn't

from the way you introduced it, i was very impressed. i was expecting to turn it off after the first 5 seconds. good job man.

oh, not a big fan of the second guitar part. kinda came through muffled. maybe if it were a little louder and served as the lead part.

cool voice over. and you hit that note really well. good job man.

Roastbeef · Post by **Roastbeef** » Fri Sep 26, 2003 7:28 pm

Great job on the guitar. Sounds like you're getting some buzzing though on that b string. Almost like you're not fretting that pinky totally. Leave it open if it's a problem for you. Sounds fine open as far as I'm concerned. Only other guitar comment is maybe try playing the strums a little more fluidly. It sounds a bit too stacatto.

I was really expecting a trainwreck for the vocals based on your post. They're actually pretty good. Trust me, I know about being your own toughest critic when it comes to singing, but I thought you did a solid job. Keep 'em coming!

borocks · Post by **borocks** » Sat Sep 27, 2003 8:20 am

You fucked nothing up man, great job on that one.

I think your voice is pretty damn good.
Compare http://www.angelfire.com/un/borocks/songs.html mine.
check out if you haven't done it yet.

I think you managed to do some parts a lot better than I did.