honestly, i wasn't really crazy about it. i like the part btw 0:00 and 0:12, didn't really like the other parts. i just didn't like the way it wasn't continuous at all, it i guess i just have a problem seeing how this could turn into a song w/ vocals. are you planning on doing that? sorry, just being honest
I liked it. I think there are some neat elements there. Try to mix it up a bit though. It does a lot of climbing and descending if you know what I mean. Structure it and it'll be a neat thing to listen to. Also try to include some transitions between the parts. I think it's cool.